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If I Were Gone

If you were never again to see me, Left to live alone in question, Deprived of whom you cared for endlessly, Would you live in hesitation? Forever to reproach of my deliverance, Meanwhile wandering through a dark forest Searching for just a single sign of my existence, Praying that I have not been put to rest. If you open your eyes You will see that I have not, But have instead been awoken. So the matter at hand As you watch the break of dawn, Remember that it is a request not a demand. I would not want you to give up on life, if I were gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/5/2014 6:00:00 AM
This is a very touching and well put together piece Jacob. I love it. Regards "B"
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Jacob Frey
Date: 12/8/2014 3:13:00 PM
thank you very much
Date: 11/25/2014 8:50:00 PM
I like how you so humbly make your request to the one who loves you and give them permission to move on. Very unselfish my friend. nicely done, Blessings Carl
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Jacob Frey
Date: 11/25/2014 9:02:00 PM
thank you the way i see it i they don't move on they will never be the same

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