If I Were An Elephant

IF I WERE AN ELEPHANT If I were an Elephant I’d pack my trunk forget about the past and move along. 12/6/2016

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Date: 12/11/2016 11:37:00 PM

This is a clever one, and I love the form! Good luck in the contest.

Date: 12/11/2016 5:17:00 PM

Yes, I would too rid myself from the baggage of the past. Smart move on your part!

Date: 12/9/2016 8:06:00 PM

haha, way to be very succinctly clever. I really want to do this contest and I am seeing a LOT of great entries!!

Date: 12/6/2016 3:13:00 PM

That's the ticket. Well said John. Just curious, would you pack a derm in that trunk? :)

Darren White
Date: 12/11/2016 11:35:00 PM

Curious question... what's a derm?

John Lawless
Date: 12/8/2016 10:08:00 PM

very "punny" Chris, very "punny"

Date: 12/6/2016 2:52:00 PM

: ) Ahoy, John. Ha!

Date: 12/6/2016 2:50:00 PM

VERY clever John!!! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx