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If I were....... If I were the sun, I would brighten up your day make your dream come true like a sun shine and you will live with happiness for ever If I were the moon, I would sail along with you Bring you the garland made of stars and you will feel your love never be sad If I were the wind, I would blow you a kiss Bring you romantic love in your heart and you will free to hold me tight without shyness If I were the rain, I would wash your sorrow Bring you happiness that shower like waterfalls and you will see your tears vanish for ever If I were the cold, I would touch you gently Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely and you will see my love for you is greatly Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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Date: 6/9/2014 7:58:00 AM
thank you for the reply and the visit on my poem..Linda
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:45:00 PM
How sweet is life, how sweet is love. how sweet that you writ a sweet poem like this. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:50:00 AM
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Date: 6/4/2014 8:58:00 AM
beautiful write
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:50:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2014 7:05:00 PM
Ravi, i enjoyed this poem. romantic, and beautiful......SKAT
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:49:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2014 12:19:00 PM
You are a lovely person Ravi, and it's nice to have you around... thank you for commenting my comment...Linda
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:49:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2014 11:35:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem of love my dear friend Ravi. I love it and thoroughly enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:49:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2014 7:13:00 AM
a powerful poem of love Ravi enjoyed it very much ty for visiting my page hugs
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Date: 5/28/2014 8:22:00 AM
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:37:00 PM
this is very nice, very sweet, ravi. You are a beautiful dreamer!
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:46:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:25:00 PM
The rhyme of every words is so soothing and a pleasant to read. This calm and soothing. Lovely poem.
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:46:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:28:00 PM
Ravi, this is lovely. I truly feel the love, and the tender pleasing love. A very warm feeling, to all you can be with whomever you wrote this for... xox..Linda
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:46:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2014 1:57:00 PM
Ahh!!! Very romantic work..I am sure that the lady that received this heart felt work was glad that your love is so true..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara..
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:47:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem of love, Ravi. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:47:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:46:00 AM
a lilting song so wonderfully done, ravi.. huggs
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:47:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2014 4:26:00 AM
- You light up the day with your beautiful poems, Ravi - Always a pleasure to read your poems. - Beautiful !! - Have a nice day my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Anne. hugs

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