If I Tell

If I tell how I feel about you how would you act? If I tell you my secret will you keep it with me? If I tell my life story could you care a little more? Would I tell you my all if I didn't trust in you? Could I tell you now what I thought about you? Should I tell you everything in risk of my feelings? I need you to be there for me if I tell.

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Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 11/10/2015 7:40:00 PM

Incisive and concise and meaningful. "Time can say nothing but 'I told you so';/ if I could tell you, I would let you know."

Jan Allison

Date: 11/10/2015 6:28:00 PM

Finding someone you can totally trust with your innermost feelings is so difficult and this fear being betrayed so often holds us back - great work Mark:-) hugs jan xx