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If I Look In My Heart

If I look in my heart
~ I woke up this morning the sun it was shining Its light through the window was all I could see It’s then that I noticed the gray clouds now calling Just another day that was waiting for me Oh how I wish for a beautiful sunrise Glowing the heavens as dawn does embrace But only find rain pouring down on this morning While longing to see the smile on your face It’s funny it seems every day this does happen I wake to the sun, glistening dew for a spell Till my eyes focus and peer at the drizzle That dampens my world when you’re not feeling well Still I press on as if all is quite normal Head out the door, face the day that does start For this I know on these days cold and lonely You are always here if I look in my heart ~

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Date: 2/3/2020 8:29:00 PM
Waterproof jacket on Chris, keep that special person within your heart warm and protected . . . : )
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 1/31/2020 4:09:00 PM
A positive message..The clouds might be gray.. with a drizzle of rain..reflecting life's pain..but in the heart..In the heart that loves so much..the sun will cast its spell.She will always be there. Lovely poem .So nice to read you again.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 4:23:00 PM
So nice to see you again my friend. Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poem. I truly do appreciate you.
Date: 1/31/2020 3:51:00 PM
"for a spell" I like this phrase , it says a lot...especially of the changing weather of life...but love remain in the heart regardless...Well done
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 3:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Arturo. For a spell is a southern thing here. :) I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 1/31/2020 2:01:00 PM
Hello Chris Green, I love this poem you created.Yes she is there if you look at your heart. Peace ,love, Joy. Darlene your friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend for your nice comment. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/31/2020 1:13:00 PM
Another excellent write Chris, always enjoy waking up to your writing, a great way to start the day...although it's already afternoon..lol!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 1:20:00 PM
It's about time you got up! : ) Thanks so very much John. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 1/31/2020 1:00:00 PM
- We've had rain and gray clouds for 5 months now ... thankfully my heart is warm :) - Thanks for this wonderful poem, Chris :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness Anne-Lise, always.
Date: 1/31/2020 11:32:00 AM
sigh... that end sums up this beautiful poem wonderfully...this was a delight to read this morning... cloudy dreary looking here too... good afternoon Chris... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 11:35:00 AM
I am happy you liked this one Sandy. Yep, another dreary day here too.
Date: 1/31/2020 11:19:00 AM
Methinks you wake up to the sun before you focus, because the of the love in your heart for your beloved. Makes all the difference in life --- to love and to be loved. No better feeling. Nicely penned, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 11:35:00 AM
Methinks you are far too kind my friend. Thank you so much GW.

Book: Shattered Sighs