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If I Gave My Heart Away

If I Gave My Heart Away... If I gave my heart away, Would you accept it, or say “Nay?” Would you hold it, close to you, Ever faithful, ever true? Or, would you spread it all around, By selling pieces, by the pound? If I gave my heart to you, What, exactly would you do? Clutch it tightly to your breast, And value me above the rest? Or take it now, to hold a place, 'Til you find a nicer face? Do I truly have a chance, To learn a lesson in romance? Flying high, my heart with wings, To study love, and other things. Or, falling fast, the outcome certain, To find that I am truly hurtin' Would you think my love a treasure, Full of fun, rife with pleasure? Would you call me, just for fun, To tell me that I am “THE ONE?” Would you think me soft and warm, Or just that “port in a storm?”

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Date: 11/6/2010 8:14:00 PM
Beautiful poetry. Congratulations on being featured. I can feel the emotion and uncertainty in your writing. Great job. Can't wait to read more from you. :)
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Date: 11/2/2010 12:01:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, Rick. You reflect very well the wonder and uncertainty we all feel when we first encounter a new love...welcome to the 'Soup...you're in good company here. I hope you're commenting on other's poems so they'll be able to visit your page and discover these treasures. Each one is very well done indeed!
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:44:00 PM
Welcome to the soup . Love, we get beaten up by it and still come back for more. Love your poem.
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:10:00 PM
Welcome Rick, I was just picking on some new people to view and I am glad I picked you. This is a lovely couplet and very well done. Thank you for sharing, I will look forward to reading more from you. As ALways, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2010 10:13:00 AM
Hi .I thought this was very good. I like it Rick.I think it's a cleverly written couplet,conveying what we all know and perhaps have experienced that love can be fickle.But we all take a chance on it because we all need it.I hope you enjoy being with us on Soup. I can vouch they're a great bunch of people ,and good poets like yourself. Luv June(sylvia)
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:39:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rick. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:33:00 AM
That poem would surely help me treasure the authors affections, if for my eyes only... well written work. Hope you have a forever love to share you life!
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