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If I Die Tonight

You’re fvcking me up. I’m dying inside. Can you not tell from the look in my eye? Sit in my bed and I’m crying all night. Baby stop yelling I don’t wanna fight. Exhausted so bad that my mouth is so dry. Can’t make a sound so therefore I’m tongue tied. I’m not gonna stop this till I fvcking die. I don’t wanna go but this is goodbye.

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Date: 11/17/2019 7:41:00 PM
nice... keep 'em coming
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Date: 11/16/2019 4:51:00 AM
This is a very sad situation and sometimes it is better to walk away rather than go through such pain.. Hope you are ok..
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Date: 11/16/2019 2:28:00 AM
Hi Dakota. This one is pretty deep. I hope this poem isnt about you. If it is I`m sorry your hurting inside. Love hurts when you lose it. I had the same feeling years ago and man it was bad. Over time the anger goes away. I met my wife that I have been with for 11 years now. Things do get better. If you need somone to talk to just let me know. I wish I had someone when this happened to me. Thanks for sharing this
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