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If I Could Paint the Sky

If I could paint the winter sky today I'd chose soft apricot instead of gray With my brush spring would come to play Each stroke bringing all the colors seen in May Oh, If I could only paint the winter sky today...

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Bradley Finken

Date: 4/4/2014 2:02:00 PM

BG, We received six inches of snow in northern Wi so far today. This poem cheers me. I posted one that addresses this day. Hope your doing well~Brad

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2014 3:11:00 AM

- A really lovely poem Barbara. - Good luck in the contest. - Here's spring arrived .... a beautiful time .... - Have a nice day .... hope spring has come to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2014 4:14:00 PM

Oh what a beautiful write - I too long for the days when we have constant sunshine and a little heat - love spring it can't come fast enough for me although things are getting warmer and brighter here in the UK hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2014 7:15:00 PM

We've had terrible weather here in the UK some areas experienced horrendous flooding. Last year where I live (Isle of Man) some areas had 15 foot snow drifts in March so we are better off now. Hope things improve - will send some British Rain to you - you are welcome to it!

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/1/2014 7:10:00 PM

Thank you Jan...Its pouring here and talk about gray skies! However we need the rain in the worst way..we are in the throes of a drought.