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If I Could Capture Sunshine

If I Could Capture Sunshine If I could capture sunshine I would plant it in my heart and nourish it with gentle love and care. I would let it grow forever like a forest it would fill me and devour all the darkness that lies there. If I could capture sunshine I would gather up the rays and hold aloft some of the radiant beams. Shining like a golden beacon they would lead me to the water flowing in the crystal river of my dreams.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/29/2009 12:02:00 PM

Dear Robin, Belated Congratulations on this Fantastic Featured POEM. The last stanza Wow "the crystal river of my dreams" I would like to follow that river, those dreams Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2009 8:17:00 PM

"and hold aloft the many radiant beams" flows better hon, (any 2 slylable word where many is will do) Add a slylable to Like a (x) golden beacon" Another very good verse. Light & Love Debbie

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/11/2009 3:49:00 PM

This is a beautiful little write. I loved it!

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/22/2009 2:34:00 PM

Wow, you captured sunshine beautifully..Fantastic write.Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week..God Bless *Tyesha

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/22/2009 11:53:00 AM

Apparently you do capture sunshine with your poetry. Congratulations Robin, on being featured this week. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 1/22/2009 9:29:00 AM

Robin - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/19/2009 5:43:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Robin. You do have sunshine in your heart! ~ Congratulation ..well deserving to be featured! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2009 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robin. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/19/2009 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations Robin on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 1/18/2009 11:41:00 PM

Congrats on your feature this week Robin.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/11/2008 2:38:00 AM

I thought that was all of them, but I found one more. I read them all in a single sitting. Thanks for your time with me, I loved it and enjoyed it. Hope to read more and I'll try my hardest not to skip any...Raul

John Rhinem

Date: 12/9/2008 5:55:00 PM

Yes, But "Christ Shed His Precious Blood For All Your Sins Beautiful Robin!"~So, Don't 'Ever' Forget That Dear Lady!~"My Love To You Always, John!"~"Loved Your Story About Your Blessed Family!"~"Sweet Dreams Precious Robin, Bye!:)

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/23/2008 8:26:00 AM

I love the way this picks up its cue from your previous poem. Great write. Love, Nigel

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/16/2008 1:31:00 PM

Hi Robin! This flows so smoothly... nice metrical construction, subtle rhyming and super imagery! Best wishes, Keith