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If I could turn time back If only till that one moment That it just would never happen I would If I could If I could turn back and see me At that very moment That I could reach out my hand I would If I could If I could cradle the little me That me that needed it That wanted to be saved I would If I could If I could make me whole again A whole person, unharmed That I would not be so broken I would If I could

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Date: 4/15/2017 9:08:00 PM
yup. hug.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/16/2017 7:40:00 AM
You betcha! It's funny you say that, about deleting, I took one down after I got no comments and I'm realizing now more about myself and may just put it back up. Hugs mon Petit Piroet.
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Darren White
Date: 4/16/2017 1:09:00 AM
Thank you, you're the only commenter, I almost deleted this :) You REALLY are working your way through my poems, aren't you!

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