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If Hell Rose To the Surface We Would All Have Burnt Feet

Don't pretend unless, of course it's worth it in the end. the present does not mend time does, the present doesn't mend. white flowers exhale so we can inhale time will tell... time will tell if hell rises demands sacrifices demoralizes and burns this world as well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/16/2013 2:56:00 PM
very nicely done, I will be reading more of your work ;} And thank you for reading my Forgotten, ;}
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:50:00 PM
This is the first poem of yours that I've read. It will not be the last. Fine work... Jack
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Patrick Farley Iv
Date: 10/16/2013 11:17:00 AM
Thank you jack!
Date: 9/17/2012 4:53:00 AM
I'm not sure if Hell is rising... but it sure as hell, that it is decending upon us... Good poem... Terry
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:44:00 PM
thank you

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