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If Hell Rose To The Surface We Would All Have Burnt Feet

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If Hell Rose To The Surface We Would All Have Burnt Feet

Don't pretend

unless, 
of course
it's worth it in the end.
the present does not mend
time does, the present doesn't mend.
white flowers exhale so we can inhale
time will tell...
time will tell 
if hell rises
demands sacrifices
demoralizes
and burns this world as well.

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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 2:56:00 PM
    very nicely done, I will be reading more of your work ;} And thank you for reading my Forgotten, ;}

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:50:00 PM
    This is the first poem of yours that I've read. It will not be the last. Fine work... Jack

    Farley IV Avatar Patrick Farley IV
    Date: 10/16/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you jack!
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 4:53:00 AM
    I'm not sure if Hell is rising... but it sure as hell, that it is decending upon us... Good poem... Terry

    Farley IV Avatar Patrick Farley IV
    Date: 9/17/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you