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If Ever

love. if ever i was to write a song or catchy sing along or direct a play using the script i wrote. or just a simple note, it would be about love, but more pacifically my love for you, like how the touch of your finger tips to my skin feels like a rush of dopamine and adrenaline, an ecstasy felling in my hart starts setting in creating addiction and if i cant have my fix of those finger tips gently caressing my skin it starts craving and caving in, or like how every time i see your face its still love at first sight, and how at night i stay awake until its light and wonder what it would be like if one day you and me might be together.

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Date: 6/23/2013 12:14:00 AM
Hi Peter, you have a flair for story telling but watch your spelling and always proof read for mistakes, other than that that you have great talent but it will take time to hone your poetry skills to an experienced level, it is the same for everyone, you have a good start, see what you are writing a year from now it will amaze you, good luck. John
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Date: 6/18/2013 2:41:00 PM
Peter, a nice simple poem to enjoy... thank you... keep the hope alive... Linda
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