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If By Chance

If by chance Minutes turn into hours and Days turn into nights and I no longer fill your thoughts With what once made you feel so alive... If by chance Choosing to conceal Yourself from me became routine And you no longer see yourself in me Just please say so, so that I to, can learn to let go.

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L.James Tanner

Date: 6/1/2014 4:43:00 PM

Really enjoyed this, such a big punch in a short poem, and the wording was well crafted. Great job!....LJ

Andy Richards

Date: 5/17/2014 11:29:00 PM

Nice poetic flow .. we are all twigs in the proverbial currents of life... sometimes difficult to change course!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2014 11:37:00 PM

Madelin, it's not that easy. I wish to say them words, could heal the void... deep little poem...Linda

Jeremy Street

Date: 5/12/2014 1:31:00 PM

This Is Very Stirring, Beautiful Madelin ~ We Living In A World Where True As Lasting Love, Seems So Rare; Ever In Search Of It's Holy Grail, So To Speak ~ When There Is Little In Life And Countless Hearts That They Know; Losing A Love At Any Turn No Matter It's Depth; Can Become Devastating Unto Their Priceless Baby's....Thus A Verse Such As This Viewed Through Empathy's Eyes; Can Strike It's Chord A Touching Note....Love, Jeremy *

Robert Andrew Lyle

Date: 5/10/2014 3:57:00 PM

If by chance your eyes have strayed stop remember the vows we made that I am still the loving one who gave life to our lovely son. Great write Madelin

Jeffrey Bovee

Date: 5/3/2014 10:40:00 PM

Very cool quick and visual love it

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 5:42:00 PM

My pleasure, if you have time, come by and have a look. Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 4:29:00 PM

This is so sad, so real and so amazing.

Madelin Barton
Date: 5/2/2014 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Richard for visiting my page `Maddie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2014 8:37:00 AM

Emotive and expressive work that you have penned in this one. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Sara

Madelin Barton
Date: 5/2/2014 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Sara ;) I am so grateful for the written word and for the ability to express what otherwise I could not. Love is a beautiful thing but we as humans very fickle. have a blessed day `Maddie