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for If Your Birthplace-Country Was A Poem Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

If Australia was a poem It would be written in galloping Iambic Full of characters leaning toward the laconic Every line a simile, every name a diminutive If Australia was a poem It would be a sun drenched beach A perpetual holiday of non-stop mate-ship, good-natured joke telling and weekend BBQ’s If Australia was a poem It’s lines would start out leafy, ending in spinnifex, head out of the big smoke to beyond the Black Stump No matter what happened in between- “She’d be right mate. If Australia was a poem It would be flowing like the landscape It would speak to you of far away, of scented , sun warmed winds and distant shades of green and grey. If Australia was a poem I’d keep it close to heart It’s familiar lines of birdsong and patriotic verse, mingling in memory this land-my home.

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Date: 1/22/2024 10:29:00 AM
Oh I love this. If it was for that older contest. I sure hope u made the list.
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Date: 1/5/2024 3:38:00 PM
Yes. Country speaks loud here,
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/6/2024 2:16:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette: It was a fun theme and I’m glad I wrote it,
Date: 7/18/2023 12:47:00 PM
So beautiful, Dear Suzanne! "If Australia was a poem" - such a touching tribute to your birthplace! Melodious, Lovely!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2023 3:17:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words and visit dear, Malabika I hope you have a wonderful day.
Date: 7/8/2023 10:36:00 AM
Nice melodious poem. Would love to go to Australia someday! Great win.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/8/2023 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Jay: I do hope you get to visit down under some day. Lots to see and do. SuZ
Date: 7/8/2023 5:37:00 AM
a limn chocked full of lovely images that convey the love so well of Australia....your quill deserves to take a bow for such a delight
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Date: 7/8/2023 11:45:00 AM
I always learn a new word from you, Timray: Thanks for you long years of friendship. SuZ
Date: 7/7/2023 5:01:00 AM
Suz, your exquisite composition boasts a delightful infusion of vivid imagery and profound ruminations. Your meticulous choice of words seamlessly transports the reader into a world brimming with unparalleled beauty. Such an evocative piece compels one to embark upon a sojourn to that enchanting destination, dear friend. I extend my utmost gratitude for gracing my page with your thoughtful commentary.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/10/2023 10:04:00 AM
I am so happy to find your wonderful comment, Sotto: I hope someday you can travel there, Best, SuZ
Date: 7/6/2023 7:47:00 AM
A fine poem, SuZ! Favorite lines: “No matter what happened in between- “She’d be right mate.” Check out my poem “In a Barrel” Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/10/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Kim: Yes most Aussie have an easy no fuss attitude LOL SuZ
Date: 7/4/2023 4:09:00 PM
When we sang Waltzing Matilda in elementary school, I wished I were that free-spirited jolly swagman instead of sitting in that boring classroom. Brought back memories of the land of my daydreams. Remember to tie me kangaroo down, sport!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/5/2023 6:26:00 PM
Those were the days, Robert: We would recite My Country by Dorothea McKellar too. Where are you living now. I didn’t know of your Aussie roots. SuZ
Date: 6/28/2023 10:42:00 AM
A lovely piece Suz, with nice imagery and insightful line of thought too. Blessings,Gordon
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/5/2023 6:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Gordon: and for your encouraging comment. SuZ
Date: 6/26/2023 3:44:00 PM
Your poem is a wonderful tribute to our amazing country…our home! You did it very proud Suz….love it!! Debx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/26/2023 4:22:00 PM
So happy you like it Deb: Yes No Place like OZ on earth. Thanks for your top comment. SuZ
Date: 6/25/2023 1:10:00 PM
This makes me want to take a trip there. Well penned for effect.
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Date: 6/26/2023 4:37:00 PM
I think you would really enjoy the natural wonders down there. The amazing Flora and Fauna. You may never want to leave. SuZ
Date: 6/10/2023 10:58:00 PM
Beautifully done SuZ. You really captured the best of Australia...
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Date: 6/11/2023 2:36:00 AM
Thanks, Michael: I appreciate you saying that. SuZ
Date: 6/10/2023 6:25:00 PM
Great read, SuZ. Your muse is quite evident in this soothing write. James
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/11/2023 2:35:00 AM
Thanks for your nice comment, James. It’s for the Contest - if your Birthplace Country was a poem.
Date: 6/10/2023 12:49:00 PM
Ahhh. Lovely so lovely.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/11/2023 2:32:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea This one came quite easily.
Date: 6/7/2023 3:58:00 PM
I used to own a travel agency here in Texas. I've sent more than a few couple to see Ayers Rock in Australia. Never been there myself, but would look to visit. Thanks for sharing in an interesting poem, SuZ. Have a good day mate! Bill
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/7/2023 5:29:00 PM
Hi Bill: Yes A visit to Uluru is a must on a trip Down Under. To me it will always be Ayer’s Rock but also respecting the traditional roots of the area. Thanks for reading and commenting. SuZ
Date: 6/5/2023 6:27:00 PM
The country lingers in these words and obviously, has a special place in the soul. There is something unique about Australia which is far deeper than the flag waving, the picture postcard stuff....your poem explores this connection. Enjoyed.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/6/2023 11:21:00 AM
Yes, Paul: It is truly a unique and wonderful place. Thanks for your visit and nice comment. SuZ
Date: 6/5/2023 10:14:00 AM
A country close to your heart Suz, it looks an amazing place, one for my bucket list. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/5/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Tom: I predict you would have a great time. I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. I watched the link you sent me this morning. Harry led a great life and will be missed by all. SuZ

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