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If Your car breaks down And times are thin And you need a quick hero I want to be him If You stand on stage and forgot your words I will cup my hands and feed you mine Ive crossed the tracks before a speeding train Before I leapt , I called your name If I work underground I push a coo-coo pan To bring you gold to see you shine Ive been to hell and brought back coal To warm you up I will fetch your soul If You come to me in the dead of night And the gods agree that this is right I see your silhouette against the light As if I was standing in your heart I am your lighthouse burning bright Your beacon and your beckoning light Perpetually melting shadows on the sea Nothing on Earth can extinguish me I am your fire and I feed on your air Unless you release me I remain over there

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Date: 9/2/2017 7:52:00 AM
To feel such passion for another is truly a gift. Without the poets ability to put these ephemeral experiences into words, that we common folk understand, I believe all depth in life would be lost. Thank you for sharing your gift.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 11/17/2017 5:20:00 AM
I am late with my reply to you. Thank you for your sincerity. I will bring back coal to warm you. Youre so very very kind
Date: 4/4/2017 8:32:00 AM
If, such a small word with such great potential. Enjoyed your write.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 4/4/2017 10:33:00 PM
I am so happy to find you here. Thanks James. Truly delighted
Date: 2/23/2017 11:39:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous, love this.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 3/27/2017 12:28:00 AM
What a nice surprise to find a new comments. Thank you Elizabeth. I will reciprocate
Date: 1/24/2017 3:44:00 AM
"If" is a great word as it opens so many possibilities to us and reinforce our spirit to hope for a better future. I like this poem. Well penned. :)
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/25/2017 4:48:00 AM
Hi Sunita. Nice to have you around again..i read your love poem too. I have some more coming up so... stick around
Date: 1/14/2017 3:04:00 PM
JANNIE - WHAT CAN I DO BUT GIVE YOU ALL CAPS? I'M OUTTA WAYS TO SAY HOW IMPRESSED I AM with your writing in the past few weeks. This is so romantic and said romance is touchingly written with beautiful notes of love playing in, between and through each word on each line. I love this very much. I'm going to go delete my current poems now ... CayCay
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/14/2017 4:16:00 PM
Whoa dont you do that. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I did not expect such praise. I dont know what to say Gee thanks my dear friend
Date: 1/11/2017 11:53:00 PM
This is a hopeful dedication and it is really nice to read this. Really inspiring and great work. Also, encouraging too. :) -JWE
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/14/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thanks JW i will reciprocate . Very happy to get praise
Date: 1/7/2017 12:28:00 AM
LOVE this, Jannie ... the imagery it paints in my mind ... really superb writing.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/7/2017 1:49:00 AM
Thanks Greg.
Date: 1/6/2017 12:06:00 AM
WOw....and now i call it uplifting! Thank you Jannie :) love and peace! rating...
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/7/2017 1:47:00 AM
Nice to see you here again. Thank you
Date: 1/4/2017 4:17:00 PM
Truly a lovely and persuasive poem which should have a magical effect on many a lass, Jannie! Top marks to you! // paul
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/4/2017 10:17:00 PM
Hi Paul, yes I noticed. I have to barricade my door. Here they come. Ha ha. Its raining women - halleluia
Date: 1/3/2017 8:57:00 AM
A 7 for your moving, uplifting poem, Jannie! Janice
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Date: 12/29/2016 2:12:00 PM
Awesome Jannie...a favorite
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/29/2016 3:01:00 PM
Wunderbahr Tim. May 2017 treat you right. Thanks fôr stopping by
Date: 12/29/2016 12:05:00 PM
This is a beauty Jannie. I quite enjoyed it. Thank you for your comments on my writes earlier. I appreciate it.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/29/2016 3:00:00 PM
I am getting a lot of attention today and its so wonderful thanks
Date: 12/29/2016 6:36:00 AM
Such a great and uplifting poem. To be all of these things for someone special...if only.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/29/2016 6:42:00 AM
All my favorite poets are cisiting me. Thank you. Indeed , if only
Date: 12/29/2016 3:57:00 AM
This is a powerfully beautiful write ... I read it several times with the wish to return ...
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/29/2016 3:59:00 AM
O Probhir, how nice of you to say so. Thanks

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