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IF If i say sorry for a hundred time would you forgive me or you just cry and run like i don't have money will you still be mine or your type of women always wanna have fun if if i say things to you that aint true like i don't have sleep at night and yet i dream about you would you believe so simple course your my boo or you will turn back give me that look and say hmm! if if i do you wrong and go down on my knees say that am sorry with thousand please would you forgive me or you will see me kind of crazy and tell your friend your a reason why i breath if

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Rose Lil

Date: 10/15/2016 6:12:00 PM

A bit of fun and a bit of thought , reflection of how somebody must accept you in and out. Great Write Welcome to poetry soup here are all the great minds of the days and through the nights :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 10/12/2016 11:48:00 PM

Where there's love there always so much hope to be forgiven but this should not go to abuse! :D Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:24:00 AM

simon nene, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Simon Nene
Date: 7/16/2016 5:29:00 PM

Thank Linda i actually not exactly belong to poem field i am a rapper but sometime i like to write poem. i would love to meet the guy who you think can guide me.

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/15/2016 2:36:00 AM

nice poem Simon;)

Simon Nene
Date: 7/16/2016 5:31:00 PM

Thanks Madhupriya

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 1:05:00 AM

Simon, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Simon Nene
Date: 7/16/2016 5:33:00 PM

Thanks a lot Skat appreciate that i will keep up the good work