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The explosion quickly happening The blast all engulfing The silence quite deafening My scream never coming The dust slowly dispersing The cry’s getting louder The pain quickly building, The tears slowly falling The blood quickly flowing The realisation overwhelming My life slowly ending

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/10/2012 5:55:00 AM
Great written!! Hope you vil read my last Haiku!!? Hugs - Laila ;o)
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Date: 11/10/2012 5:49:00 AM
You have done an awesome job.your poem is exotic. Hope you read my poem. Love,Rohith Premanand
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Date: 11/7/2012 2:10:00 PM
Great write Stephen, can relate
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