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We feel within, magnetic heat, gripping us in meditation and as rapture within us grows, false identity falls away, whence we reclaim our inner light, here and now, in the waking state. No doubt at first, fear forms yet bait but with head bowed low at God’s feet, we imbibe wisdom, byte by byte, speeding soul’s acceleration and now that bliss is here to stay, third eye pulsates between eyebrows. Holder of the flame alone knows, what it feels like at heavens gate, which once we grant love right of way, finds us head to toe bliss replete, feeling one with God’s creation, awakened to spherical sight. Love drenched thus by day and by night, presence repays debts our soul owes, immersed in endless flirtation with bliss without a goal to state, so fellow souls we meet and greet, treating flow of life as mere play. For pure of heart, there’s no delay, in reaching heaven’s zenith height, for with bliss keeping heart upbeat, essence of presence freely flows, being worthy, joyous and chaste, God alone soul’s aspiration. Bliss thus forms soul growth foundation, with mindfulness as our mainstay and as nodes within us gyrate, we dwell at all times in delight, borne by grace God Himself bestows, ascent from which there’s no retreat. Pulse of love continues to tweet, gripping us in blissful repose, till we see light of Self bright white.

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Date: 12/9/2023 11:17:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, I like the first verse. The fourth verse. The whole poem. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2023 4:57:00 PM
Thank you for letting me know. blessings my friend./Darlene/
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/12/2023 10:42:00 PM
This is a modified Sestina, not strictly as per the rule
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Date: 12/12/2023 5:50:00 PM
No, its a breeze (if focus is held on the message being weaved) but the poem becomes a bit long and of course there should be adequate number of suitable words fitting into the rhyme sequence. For this one, I made it 8 syllables per line, although syllables are not a requirement
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/11/2023 2:57:00 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, Was the Sestina form easy to do? Did hyou have trouble to figure it out? i was just wondering. bleswsings my friend. /Darlene/
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/9/2023 3:34:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I’m trying out this Sestina form these days as an experiment!

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