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Ideology

We drove home on that Sunday. The summer I was twelve it was hot, windows down instructing me about freedom, liberties, rights, never considered self. A lager fixed firmly between your legs as you drummed the steering wheel in unison to oldies from the radio. It was a 66' Ford pickup, green with the smell of pride that hung from the rear view swinging to the road. I remember it was like a personality that was assigned to you, which is not yours at all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 6:08:00 AM
What a wonderful memory to have, Jason! When I was young, our family took many car trips and you brought back the togetherness we shared in this great write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/3/2009 9:12:00 PM
This is really powerful. You did a great job of painting this portrait. I could feel myself agreeing with your viewpoint that it was like putting on a suit of clothes (the music..the car..etc)
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Date: 8/2/2009 2:21:00 PM
Very descriptive. I can feel the heat and hear the talk. Sara
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Date: 8/2/2009 1:32:00 PM
Brilliant write my friend..."it was like a personality that was assigned to you"..this line speaks loudly...good writing.
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