Identity

They thought us kings, demi-gods We were unique, wild and free Daring to go where no others have Reaching for the farthest stars, dreaming Of life and its endless possibilities Living for now, tomorrow is but a sweet dream. It’s been too long since those days The long cold nights, star-struck When we were young and dumb Now we are all grown up Or are we less of who we wanted And more like the world we live? I can’t put a finger on it Yet I can’t help but wonder Did we give up the best of us? For something that doesn’t satisfy Still we yearn to be free and wild For how long though? Growing up and growing old Are the two linked? Are they the same? Can the child you were recognize the adult? We have no fate but what we make Look not back, for then you are lost Life like time waits for no one So too does the world But it’s okay to be different It’s the essence of humanity.

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 12:31:00 AM

Brian, sounds as if your dreams were killed, Awesome poem, :), Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2016 7:11:00 AM

Brian,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"