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Devoted to whats right, determined to survive, dedicated to prevail, drove to meet her again. Smiling is all I can do, seeing a picture so colorful, sensing whats in the air, stopping to catch up. Movement left and right, moments that last forever, making joy tangible, Mesmerized by her.

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Date: 6/3/2010 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Norbert. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 6:21:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:24:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Norbert. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:03:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/15/2010 4:01:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Norbert. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:19:00 AM
A very nice write, I enjoyed the read. I hope to read more of your poetry. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Caryl
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:57:00 PM
Good flow in this poem. Nice use of alliteration. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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