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Idealism

The snow becomes slush its whiteness is gone, it turns into rain as people in grief. Passing sails glide like gondolas in old Venice, no lover sings. Can sunset bring surprise, happiness... with real hope? Gladness isn't found here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/15/2010 12:20:00 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Andrew.Rgds Brian & best wishes with this one.
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:34:00 PM
Wonderful Hexaverse...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 2/13/2010 12:26:00 PM
Very thought-provoking, Andrew. We were filled with an idealistic hope last year when our new president took office. Now it seems like the hope is gone. Not blaming Obama. We just had stars in our eyes thinking anyone could deliver on all the promises that were made. You have a gem here, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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