Idea

Idea searches for perseverance, And smiles upon the hopeful beams of your mind Chasing all traces of doubt with a heart ablaze Idea will marvel at what others find in you ordinary She will laugh at ignorant insult spat your way Will humiliate the lazy lockjaw The lividly caged lark, Who speaks only to trip your feet with its dead coercion Lose sleep in the glory of this truth, That when Idea finds you, Idea will be ever grateful Ever indebted And always open Will always listen, And never fight without righteous reason Drape your arms around what has slipped away, For it is so that the thought, the desire yet still exists! Press your opening upon the surface of the unattainable, And in time, the impossible will search for your own lips Embryonic in its humble development, Deliberate, maturing in its transformation As you feed anxiously, forming new inspirations, As you tread upon unusual waters that dare to suck the muscle from your soul As you find meaning to the muck of my mastery Know this: Idea will end your enemies’ reign with each glimmer of every star And in a moment, Idea will bring you and I closer Fervidly, knowingly, and effectively So that we may labor through many pleasurable births To keep her smile alive forever

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/8/2015 7:07:00 PM

Yes, we do live for honest expression, and hope that it wins out, and that we find what is beautiful about ourselves. The idea to keep this alive is most noble. How do you come up with all the machinations? It is most wonderful and impressive. Yes, a little habitation on the bright side. Not a bad thing at all.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/9/2015 3:34:00 AM

It's the magic of deep love and inspiration dear...you, and many others inspire me to keep going, to welcome Idea with her many smiles...much love to you...~Laura

Paul Callus

Date: 9/8/2015 5:27:00 PM

You bring Idea to life with these measured and clear thoughts, Laura. Desires can thus find their way beneath "the surface of the unattainable" and become reality. Love the final lines which teem with positivity. ~ Regards // paul

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/9/2015 3:33:00 AM

Thanks Paul, for the sweet and thoughtful reviews! ~Laura

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/8/2015 1:12:00 AM

Continued. ..To be exploited for the sake of pure love is an honor if for the betterment of our two living hearts. "So that we may labor through many pleasurable births..." amazing poetry of love purpose Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/8/2015 2:03:00 AM

The impossible becomes shaped into unimaginable creations collaborated by two light-stricken, love-drenched fuses. Thank you for your praise..your love is extremely blessed to have you! ~Laura

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/8/2015 1:08:00 AM

The conviction of your tone is tremendous in clarity, and undoubtable in drive. You present Idea as so very sexy, the resolve graciously romantic, the desire for life fantatical, everything devotion should be, everyway I want love to be for my Love and I Laura. In my eyes, Idea personifies the positive, and even ferocious power of love eternal...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/8/2015 1:53:00 AM

Yes, Justin...may I add that Idea's nature and purpose is to nurture those who embrace love, to fuel two with inertial excitement and even spiritual enlightenment. The possibilities are infinite with this positivity. You live in that heavenly smile, dear poet. You have always..~Laura

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/7/2015 5:10:00 AM

Lovely poem, Laura. There is a depth to it that is intriguing. You write with passion and strength. Very attractive qualities, my dear. :) Sending hugs

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/7/2015 5:17:00 AM

Hello Eileen! Thank you for such high praise, and for taking the time to read this one.. your poetry makes my heart flutter special. It means a lot to receive a comment from such a beautiful, passionate poetess. ~Laura