Icy Invitation

Winter shows her tongue With laps of frozen laughter Teasing all who watch.

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Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:11:00 AM

Hi Ray, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/1/2010 5:41:00 AM

ohhhhh good one! most excellent! Light & Love

Marty Owens

Date: 2/26/2010 7:33:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...enjoyed....good luck in the contest...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2010 5:48:00 PM

Great ideas here in this Haiku that should be in the winner's circle if an entry. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2010 8:01:00 AM

Good luck if this is your entry for Raul's new contest.. luv those icy invitation words... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2010 7:59:00 AM

Touche' Ray .. nice way to say .. more snow on the way .. only thing to do is play.. or pray .. it stops sometime today .. like your lines say ... icy invitation OK.. thankxxx ..hey..was a great response to my blog Ray.. u are OK... luv your Haiku I say.. u definitely made my day.. luv.. "Sweetheart"