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Icy

It started as a whisper, a rustle in the trees, given no attention, written off as just a breeze. Then came the feeling, in the dark, of being watched, tried to ignore it, tried to blow it off. Walking, being followed, footfalls from behind, paranoid and worried, glancing back from time to time. Figures, shadows, movement, from the corner of the eye, something's getting nearer and you think that you know why. Aging, slowing down now, you can feel it catching up. Can you read the tea leaves in the bottom of your cup? The demeanor of the doctor knocks the wind out of your sails, feeling disembodied as you sense your face grow pale. You know you can't outrun it, death is nipping at your heels, try to keep it secret, no one knows how bad you feel. Try to find some peace now, but it's breathing down your neck. and, God, it's breath is icy, though its path is circumspect. ©Danielle White

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Date: 6/12/2009 10:18:00 AM
Clever write Danielle, well crafted>James
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:42:00 AM
Very true, this poem made me think alot....A beautiful piece -Jessica
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Date: 5/28/2009 3:23:00 AM
Danielle, This poem on aging is perceptive. I try not to think about age. My grandmothers didn't think of themselves as old. And they stayed young at heart. One lived to be 98 The other one lived to be 99 and was fun, funny, and alert up until her last few days. I miss them both. When I start to get that mental image of myself as I feel old, I try to chase it away. I don't want death nipping at my heals, yet. I loved your poem. With Love, Dane
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:19:00 PM
Nice poem, Danielle. There's no running away from death and aging is certainly better than the alternative. Love, Carolyn
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