Icicles

icicles melting in the warm winter sun going going gone Let’s Get Creative With Haiku Poetry Contest Constance La France 3/17/2021 5/6/5

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/16/2022 12:17:00 PM

Hello J. Summers icicles do melt fast in the winter sunlight. Enjoybyour day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2022 5:31:00 AM

Hello J. Summers, some of those icicles are huge !They take forever to melt. Enjoy your day my friend. ---Darlene

J. Summers
Date: 5/16/2022 4:06:00 PM

Thanks much Darlene. John

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2021 12:34:00 PM

wow what a creative haiku, love the way you formatted it to look like melting icicles:-) hugs Jan xx

J. Summers
Date: 4/8/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Jan, hoping all is well. John

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 9:05:00 AM

Wonderful John. Excellent imagery. Just like the icicles melting on my eaves right now. Good Stuff, God Bless, JB

J. Summers
Date: 3/27/2021 10:31:00 PM

Thanks Judy, it is always appreciated. John

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/22/2021 6:37:00 AM

Yay, yay, yay. Spring has sprung!

J. Summers
Date: 3/22/2021 5:29:00 PM

It is so good to see winter finally on its way out. Thanks. John

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/21/2021 7:09:00 AM

love it ~

J. Summers
Date: 3/21/2021 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Line, hoping you are doing fine. John

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/21/2021 6:50:00 AM

Great haiku about something we see in winter. Today is the first day of spring, and the weather can only get better.

J. Summers
Date: 3/21/2021 12:25:00 PM

It’s a great day here in East Tennessee. Getting ready to fire up the grill for honey chipotle chicken quarters and strip steaks. Thanks for reading. John

Virginia Gelok

Date: 3/20/2021 4:13:00 PM

I finally get this Haiku Poetry. Your melting icicles did it for me. Can't wait to learn so much more here on Poetry Soup.

J. Summers
Date: 3/20/2021 9:17:00 PM

Thanks for the comments Virginia, they are appreciated. I've been reading yours and I like what I see. John

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/19/2021 4:10:00 PM

Hello John Summers, yes the icices hanging on the edge of the roof melting gone. Enjy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2021 10:43:00 AM

Hello John, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.

J. Summers
Date: 3/20/2021 12:03:00 PM

Hi Darlene, thanks for reading. John

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2021 6:25:00 AM

- A great haiku, J. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

J. Summers
Date: 3/19/2021 10:57:00 AM

Thanks much, it is always appreciated. John