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Ice King

the color of cold blue reflecting silver light pain pierces the dream Barbara Gorelick I tried this on a HOT day in California=melting ice bathes a sunburn

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2013 12:56:00 PM

I hope that the ice helped the sunburn..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 4:57:00 PM

B G... , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA ;

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 2:18:00 PM

- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Barbara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2013 2:04:00 PM

BARBARA, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:43:00 AM

wow, you did brilliantly with yours.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:43:00 AM

and it looks like we both did a senryu form.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2013 9:31:00 AM

the tittle got my attenting lol, I love the first line the color of cold, kind of puts this image of my mind which is what a good write does, enjoyed this one, ~always, Lilnda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 3:15:00 AM

- This was well written, Barbara. - Wishing you good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Elai Cee

Date: 7/22/2013 3:01:00 AM

it makes me smile here Barbara! good imagery!