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Ice King

the color of cold blue reflecting silver light pain pierces the dream
Barbara Gorelick I tried this on a HOT day in California=melting ice bathes a sunburn

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:56:00 PM
    I hope that the ice helped the sunburn..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Barbara, love the colors, great win in Skat’s contest on this interesting challenge!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:57:00 PM
    B G... , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA ;

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:18:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Barbara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:04:00 PM
    BARBARA, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:43:00 AM
    wow, you did brilliantly with yours.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:43:00 AM
    and it looks like we both did a senryu form.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:31:00 AM
    the tittle got my attenting lol, I love the first line the color of cold, kind of puts this image of my mind which is what a good write does, enjoyed this one, ~always, Lilnda

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:15:00 AM
    - This was well written, Barbara. - Wishing you good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:01:00 AM
    it makes me smile here Barbara! good imagery!