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Ice Cream Cake

The scrumptious smell of chocolate, With sticky whip cream and cherry at top Touches my lip and makes my eyes swirl, Its choco flavor melts in my mouth. A frozen cake coated with ice cream. An oozing lava on its side, A unique texture that drops in my tongue, Only makes me want to ask for more. Eyes are closed when chewing the nuts A heavenly taste that keeps me in touch. I could eat this cold dessert every day. This ice cream cake is so rare to taste. October 28, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/12/2015 3:27:00 PM
Yummy poem, well done!
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:39:00 PM
Hello Poets! I just want to say I'm well delighted to read your comments! Thank you
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:51:00 PM
Lei, I'm having a sugar overload. Nice write.
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Lei!
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Date: 11/1/2015 8:13:00 PM
Lei, I like how you describe this one!!! I could imagine you relaxing and just savoring each spoonful til the drops of this ice cream cake... ! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Lei Strauss
Date: 11/1/2015 11:40:00 PM
Hi Olive! Thanks for placing me on your contest... I appreciate it
Date: 11/1/2015 5:02:00 PM
Ice cream cake is so unique. WEll done and congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/1/2015 3:34:00 PM
Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2015 2:56:00 PM
Lei, congratulations. SKAT
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Date: 11/1/2015 1:38:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/1/2015 12:40:00 PM
MMMmmmm...Wonderful write, Lei, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/1/2015 8:38:00 AM
Well done, Lei. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/29/2015 6:21:00 PM
This is high calorie poetry. I feel full just by reading this very descriptive piece.
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Lei Strauss
Date: 10/29/2015 6:24:00 PM
It makes me want to eat some Robert
Date: 10/28/2015 11:31:00 AM
mmm sounds delicious Lei:-) hugs jan xx
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Lei Strauss
Date: 10/29/2015 6:25:00 PM
Oh!!! Eating ice cream cake is like heaven Jan lol

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