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Ice Breaker

The limbs of the tree are now cold and barren as they reach up into the sky above searching for what was lost, as the playful, fallen leaves are now gone, taken away with the winds of time. Nothing but a gray cloudiness overtakes the skies the warm sunlight disappears more and more each day as the darkness closes in. Frigid winds come down from the North, bringing with them a reckless abandon with no care for the warmth of the human heart. Cold raindrops evolve into icy snowflakes that fall for miles before they reach the earth and are caught by the barren arms of the tree. The world is now silent in the grace of wintertime. A stubborn chill surrounds the human heart trying to instill itself into every chamber yet, it cannot end the beating drum when there is a song of happiness dwelling there forevermore. Some days the sun still shines, yet, it changes nothing the warmth lingers somewhere else, until the sun decides to stay a little more each day. Eventually, the warm-hearted will melt away the frost around them. The frozen ice will begin to thaw and disappear, soon a small crack forms, and spreads across separating the ice where a trickle of water is finally free to flow out into the warmth of springtime. And the world comes back to life, re-awakening and reborn again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2015 7:19:00 AM
The re-awakeing is always beautiful, congrats Kelly :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/8/2015 11:07:00 PM
Yes, it is always something to look forward to, Ed... Your kind congrats are much appreciated!
Date: 5/5/2015 7:12:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Kelly, filled with visions of Winter's reign and the passing of her days to Spring. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/8/2015 12:25:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, Sandra. They are very much appreciated!
Date: 5/5/2015 3:02:00 PM
Kelly, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for this Kelly. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/18/2014 9:04:00 AM
Kelly What a wonderful wintery write. The imagery and descriptive lines make the reader feel the chill and coldness in each line. Thank you for the great comment on my Friends Help You poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, as well, Robin. I do appreciate it! :)
Date: 3/17/2014 3:42:00 AM
Kelly - This poem is a perfect example of a Metaphor...Read it serveral times and I'm gonna fav it so I can study it and learn from you...Congrats - Tim
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2014 9:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tim! I really do appreciate the fav! I don't write metaphorical poems very often, but maybe I should be doing more. You are one of the few who have noticed the metaphors in this poem! Thanks, once again, Tim! :)
Date: 3/16/2014 3:35:00 PM
Hi Kelly, I'm from Minnesota and feel what you are saying - Great writing!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2014 9:08:00 PM
Hi Dave, I live in Wisconsin, and after this long winter I think we are all hoping for an early spring this year! Thank you very much for the kind comments. I do appreciate it! :)
Date: 3/16/2014 5:01:00 AM
Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2014 5:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Dr. Ram! I appreciate it very much.
Date: 3/16/2014 4:18:00 AM
Kelly:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2014 5:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT! You take care, too. :)
Date: 3/16/2014 4:00:00 AM
Hi Kelly, , Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2014 5:31:00 PM
You're welcome, Linda! Thank you so much for my placement in your contest! :)
Date: 2/22/2014 7:22:00 AM
Great write! Wintertime struggles are known to us all. I personally want to sleep until spring. But there is a certain beauty in the winter. Beautifully written!!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/26/2014 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heather! I know exactly what you mean. I live in Wisconsin, and it seems like spring is never going to arrive here. But, winter is one of my favorite seasons, so I want to enjoy the beauty of the snow, while I still can. :)
Date: 2/9/2014 6:58:00 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/10/2014 5:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Dr. Ram. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 2/8/2014 8:12:00 AM
extremely beautifully penned dear friend
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 11:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Liam. I always appreciate your kind words, my dear friend! :)
Date: 2/7/2014 7:39:00 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Kelly !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 10:10:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with such kind words, Anne-Lise. I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 2/7/2014 3:57:00 PM
but for now get use to this cold unrelenting freeze. it sounds nice though.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 9:58:00 PM
I have lived in Wisconsin for my entire life, so this bitterly cold weather is nothing new to me! Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 2/7/2014 2:56:00 PM
how stunning can this work be with your lyrical words, kelly... so nice to read you again!.. wow; huggs!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Nette! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. It was so nice to have you stop by again! Hugs! :)
Date: 2/7/2014 2:55:00 PM
- Really a skilled and well written poem, Kelly! - I enjoyed reading it. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 5:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments, Anne-Lise! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate you stopping by. And, I hope that you have a great weekend, too. :)
Date: 2/6/2014 1:56:00 PM
I am looking forward dor the re-awakening and reborn..It will soon be here but it seems like it is going to take forever..Your presence at my work inspires me to continue..Thanks..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 4:24:00 PM
This has been a really long, cold winter, and I think that I am ready for a nice, warm spring! It will be here before we know it!...You're welcome, Sara. Thank you for your kind visit, as well.
Date: 2/6/2014 8:48:00 AM
wow, what a splendid poem. You are really being influenced by the icy coldness of this year I think. I just loved this line you wrote: the world is now silent in the grace of wintertime.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! I always appreciate your kind words. The bitter cold has been hard to escape this winter, so I think it has influenced my writing quite a bit.
Date: 2/5/2014 1:53:00 PM
I enjoyed it. please visit my posts
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/7/2014 11:18:00 PM
Thank you, Mohammad! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. And, I will be visiting your posts soon!

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