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Enjoy the heat Ice laced drinks Summer's best treat Catch forty winks Cherish hammock time Swinging mind thinks The sea sublime Entreats to compete Swim solo chime Form: POI

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/25/2024 1:02:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2024 10:44:00 AM

You did this form very well..

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/22/2024 5:45:00 PM

fabulous contest entry! Wishing you the best with this POI for the contest, hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2024 2:28:00 AM

I would find it difficult for me but you did a good job. Best for a win.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/22/2024 2:11:00 AM

Creatively woven icy write that is so warm and beautiful! I am not sure how this contest is to be done yet, but i think youv nailed it! So effortlessly dear joanna. Best wishes for the contest