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I Wuv You

Sometimes I see the emptiness you hide inside your heart Sometimes I feel your pains caress before you start to talk The whine between the sylables tell me of the pain my concern for you is finding who or what to blame I take you in my arms although your far away I give my voice the charm that keep your tears at bay I think of ways to please you while your voice it stays Because to get into my lonely heart you have found the way Although your not here you fill the empty gaps Lonely and desprite feeling my other friends let lapse I don't look for feelings because they're so hard to find Sometimes looking for feelings bring a confused state of mind But when i think of you you are my one of a kind God couldn't have been kinder making you in my time And if your looking for reasons of why I'd write this rhyme Then your no closer to believing it or any of my line But you can take this with you until the end of time This thing that you are to me I'll always keep as mine

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Date: 7/10/2022 5:58:00 AM
A pleasure to read again. As for the title, in retrospect it’s perfect. The title makes you think it will be silly fun but you get surprised by the depth of the piece. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 7/5/2022 9:15:00 AM
I see this was posted long ago, but the feelings have to be just as strong. this is a beautiful emotive poem, John.
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Date: 7/4/2022 4:12:00 AM
Very emotive and expressive work you have penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/11/2022 6:38:00 AM
Sometimes we just gotta say, “I wuv you…”..but seriously love is deeper than that and your fine poem demonstrates the difference. Best, SuZ
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Date: 10/29/2016 11:50:00 AM
I Wuv this write!:) Judy nailed it with her comment, John, for this truly is a serious piece! Am not surprised, for essentially I've always found you to be the thoughtful and romantic type. Best regards, Mikki
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Date: 5/2/2016 10:18:00 AM
At first I thought from the title it would be more cute and funny instead of a serious piece. This speaks to me of someone trying hard to find a way of expressing his feelings to someone who is just as insecure as he is. Well Done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/29/2015 12:05:00 PM
John, You are funny, You are making my moment with Nathan, wonderful. LINDA
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Date: 8/26/2014 6:18:00 PM
WOW,, John, who do you love. it's been a long time... Anyways, I like this line the most.. God couldn't have been kinder making you in my time-- Glad, you are not taking it for granted... By the way, sorry, I have not been a good friend to nobody... Luv ~Linda
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:28:00 PM
Can't remember who I wrote it for It may have been for you.
Date: 5/29/2014 8:30:00 AM
This is a wonderful heart warming piece John. Perfect from start to finish. The title does not do it justice!
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John Loving Iii
Date: 8/8/2015 3:43:00 PM
your so right but I'm still looking for ......
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John Loving Iii
Date: 3/24/2015 6:27:00 PM
the title!? You name it and if I like it i'll change it.
Date: 5/21/2014 1:43:00 PM
Sweet poem almost like a breath of fresh air-Love Ettie
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Date: 4/21/2014 11:07:00 AM
Oh My! Touching and beautiful indeed. Your heart showed here... deeply. I'm glad you wrote this to share with us... Tho I truly feel it was written for her and we were just the by-standing readers...
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Date: 3/27/2014 2:39:00 PM
This is a great poem John. I loved it from the beginning to the end... Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 2/26/2014 8:00:00 PM
very sweet one and you made it different with the title!! I saw you did a MLK poem. Gotta go see that one.
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