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I Write My Poems In Blood

It snowed and snowed on the day I was born, And for that reason I love falling snow; In dreams, I walk the frozen woods till morn, And from my pen the words just drip and flow. And from a child, I was quiet and odd, Choosing to read old books and write my words; I would wander in nature and be awed, Loving the songs and beauty of sweet birds. A bird of green is singing me a song, And on my hand she came to look at me; I hold my breath and she became my friend, This gothic girl is deeply sad, forlorn. Was born to weep, to write my verse in blood, A cold wind reminds me that I must wake; And snow is falling softly in my dream, It snowed and snowed on the day I was born ______________________________ May 11, 2016 Blank Verse For the contest, I Drew A Blank sponsor, John Lawless Seventh Place

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Date: 6/5/2016 7:00:00 AM
The imagery was chilling yet beautiful at the same time. Much talent can be found in being unique. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/4/2016 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings. Loved the read. ~karam~
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Date: 6/3/2016 10:15:00 AM
Deep, lovely and so chillingly emotional, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:09:00 PM
BW, There is a coldness fueling the passion of this poem wrapped in the repetition of the first and last lines. This poem slowed this reader as it chill quieted the rush. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:50:00 AM
The love of snow and old books ... I can relate to both of those (though sadly I probably won't be seeing much snow where I live now) ... there's just something magical and mysterious about an old book sitting on a shelf. You're an intriguing poet, Constance. And though you write a lot of sad poems, I always feel there's a ray of optimism hiding in your voice. Good stuff here.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/16/2016 12:13:00 PM
Tim, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, oh yes I write sad poems-gossamer, it is my forte
Date: 5/14/2016 2:34:00 PM
Hi Constace....for me you are the poet of lovely and happy sadness, if you know what I mean! That is your main trademark, and it's what makes your poems a pleasure to read. Your pen runs blood....when it settles and dries, it turns to gold! ~ Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 5/16/2016 12:15:00 PM
Paul thanks for that beautiful comment, appreciated
Date: 5/13/2016 3:45:00 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. A 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/12/2016 2:34:00 AM
Touching write dear poet, I so love poetry that takes me there! And you know, I truly believe that these feelings that you have laid on paper here, is how life truly is and should be with every pneuma! Whether the weather! *sm have a wonderful day.... much love, James
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2016 10:31:00 PM
james thanks for the visit and the comment
Date: 5/11/2016 4:53:00 PM
A true appreciate of nature and words, the powerful emotions of both. Well wrote. :)
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:29:00 PM
casarah thanks for the compliment
Date: 5/11/2016 4:24:00 PM
Your images are striking. A contrast of scenes and colors. There is nothing happy without the sadness that accompanies it. It's the nature of our existence, but you are completely in touch with it all. A kind wind must pass over your soul.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2016 10:28:00 PM
duke thanks for that lovely comment appreciate so much
Date: 5/11/2016 3:28:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem you have written Constance. Embrace who you are for there is only one you.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2016 10:27:00 PM
tim thanks for the nice compliment

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