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I Wonder How It Will Be

I wonder how it will be , The silence as it echoes, The waves slapping the ground, The cold breeze dancing all around, The trees as they whooshed and talked, The Sun as it stitched a golden horizon, Finally retiring from it's monotonous job. What a magical moment it will be, As an instinctive smile creeps within. When stress and pressure be replaced, By satisfaction and glee, I wish I could experience this daily. 5/8/2022

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/1/2023 2:21:00 PM

And, i, too, have discovered your poetry here in this poem of rich imagery. I’ m now a follower. Blessings to you. sally

Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/2/2023 12:03:00 AM

I am so glad to find you here Sally... Glad you liked my poem! Have a great day! :) And also thank you for the follow I will surely read your poems too but currently I'm in the middle of my exams !

Terrell Martin

Date: 8/9/2022 1:33:00 PM

I'm so glad I found you in this lovely poem, Komal. The imagery is beautifully expressive as if nature HIM/HERself is speaking directly through you. Well written & "Write on," Terry

Komal Walimbe
Date: 8/10/2022 3:02:00 AM

Thank you Terrell for commenting on my poem! Glad you stopped by here! Yes nature creates magical things! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/8/2022 3:24:00 PM

It would be nice. Something to think about my friend. I like your poem, the imagery made it fun to read. Hugs, Bill

Komal Walimbe
Date: 8/9/2022 2:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Bill, glad you liked it! Yes it would be nice... Hope you are doing great!:)