I Wonder

I Wonder I wonder where bad people go Maybe a place no peace will ever be Maybe eternal fire roasting their soul Maybe forever tormenting them selves Maybe they will be erased from history Maybe their pain will beg for mercy One thing for sure nothing good will come of scum What you give you will get for eternity There will always be a price to pay I hope all scum are washed away

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/11/2017 11:44:00 AM

You said it well Niall. Have a nice day my friend.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/11/2017 3:52:00 PM

Hi Darlene , thank you for your comment my friend ::)) hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/5/2017 6:11:00 PM

I don't know where was my manner. I for got to thank you. So thank you a whole lot my Irish friend... hugs and smiles and peace and love :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/6/2017 1:34:00 AM

Hi Akkina , have a beautiful day my friend , I will be having my mango and tango later today but I better keep an eye on my dodgy back lol maybe no tango only Mango :::))))))) hugs , peace , love , lots of smiles)))))

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/5/2017 4:03:00 PM

Niall, You just made me tear up ;( I don't know if I would want them to burn forever but that would be up to God I guess. I forgave them but I would rather to never set eyes on them ever... Your poem touch me my dear friend... hugs and smiles always :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/5/2017 4:15:00 PM

Hi Akkina , hugs and smiles my dear friend , yes 'God' is our Father he will judge, Amen ::)) hugs ,peace , love ,smiles my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2017 1:33:00 PM

- It does not matter where they end ... but they deserve their punishment ... - Well written, Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/5/2017 4:07:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , thanks for comment , bad Karma for bad people ::))) hugs

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/5/2017 7:24:00 AM

Strong words Niall, what was the cause o this poem.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/5/2017 11:44:00 AM

Good on ya!

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/5/2017 11:07:00 AM

Hi Patricia , I was reading a true story that upset me deeply and I wanted everyone to know that nobody gets away with evil to others ::)) hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 9/4/2017 6:35:00 PM

I hope they go to a place suited for them to suffer as they caused others to suffer...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/5/2017 7:24:00 AM

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/5/2017 1:22:00 AM

Hi Tim , I truly believe if you cause pain to others you will get it back ten times and more

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/4/2017 5:18:00 PM

Well apparently you didn't get the memo, I think now they send them all to the White House! LOL Nice poem, kindness also wins over evil, eventually....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2017 1:30:00 PM

:)))

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/4/2017 5:55:00 PM

Hi Arthur , lol the worry is a lot of people had to vote them in ,, thanks for comment my friend :))