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I Without You

What's the sun without a shine What's a glass without its wine What's a beach without an ocean What's a ride without its motion What's a car without its wheels What's an orange without its peel What's a foot without a shoe What am I without You

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/8/2009 6:32:00 PM
cute and convincing. jhl
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:14:00 PM
Very lovely write, So warm and fresh-- Creatively crafted with an interesting perspective...This piece flowed so beautifully--Love the ending, God Bless *Tyesha
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