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We are not related, but you are always there To lend me support, I’m so lucky that you care When my husband had surgery and was so very ill Your friendship was amazing and you are here for me still My family in particular gave me so little support You stepped in with shopping and little gifts that you brought I have found a true angel and her name is Chris If I could chose a relation then I'd have you for my sis We can’t choose our family but we can choose our friends I hope our friendship lasts forever until our life ends Contest:- When older or younger siblings step in Sponsor:- Eve Roper 12~ 28~15

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:59:00 PM
JAN, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/20/2016 3:15:00 AM
A deep and emotional dedication to a friend.... Congrats Jan, on your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/24/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/18/2016 8:36:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
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Date: 1/24/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/16/2016 11:38:00 PM
Very well said Jan. You're blessed indeed. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Scott:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/15/2016 6:27:00 PM
Such a nice tribute to your dear friend, Jan. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/15/2016 4:52:00 PM
My congratulations on your win, Jan! Family should be a bond of love and I am sorry you didn't get it from them. At least, you have found a true friend and you should be happy. We didn't get snow at all. I hope you stay inside and keep warm. Thank you for your kind comment today. Have a lovely evening. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 1/15/2016 4:54:00 PM
We have had a flurry of snow and hail but thankfully nothing sticking... so far and long may it stay like that. If I could choose a sister I know who I would choose:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/15/2016 4:42:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your friend, sometimes friendship has a stronger bond than family. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/15/2016 4:44:00 PM
Most definitely the case here Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/15/2016 4:28:00 PM
best friends a true sisters, jan... cheery congrats on your win and huggs!
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Date: 1/15/2016 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette:-) welcome home:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/31/2015 12:26:00 AM
Pretty and very touching ... CayCay
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:56:00 AM
Thanks CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/30/2015 2:34:00 PM
This is an excellent entry for the contest, Jan, but apart from the content I must remark on how lucky you are to have such a good friend...a most fitting tribute. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/30/2015 2:35:00 PM
I am very blessed to have wonderful friends in my life Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/29/2015 9:11:00 PM
That is a real friend...beautiful tribute Jan...best wishes...hugs
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/29/2015 7:48:00 PM
Very touching, Jan. I echo your sentiment. This happened to me too. Friends came over with home cooked food and everything when mom died as we were too busy. The last couplet captured the essence of this write. We treasure people like them. A win, for sure. hugs!
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Date: 12/29/2015 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/29/2015 4:22:00 AM
Such a lovely cute little emotion Jan.. best wishes for contest!
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Date: 12/29/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 6:31:00 PM
very touching, jan! it's great to have a friend like that...
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Date: 12/28/2015 6:31:00 PM
I am very lucky Ilene:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 5:27:00 PM
Chris is the kind of friend we all should have. What a wonderful friend you have Jan. I'm also here for you if you need anything. God bless you my Dear.
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Date: 12/28/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Michael - if I could clone Chris I would share her with everyone she is a real joy to have in my life and I treasure her friendship and support:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 3:22:00 PM
Wonderful :)
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Date: 12/28/2015 3:28:00 PM
Thank you - it is at time of crisis you find out those you can truly rely on:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 12:32:00 PM
Fabulous love song to your dear friend, Chris. Love the rhyme in this. Jan. Excellent.
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Date: 12/28/2015 12:40:00 PM
Thanks Robyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 12:20:00 PM
Oh my dear this is very touchy and elegant in the same time , I'm so in love with this one ,some times friends Could be the best thing that ever happened in our lives, they r a bless...Well ur friend us lucky to have u as much as u r ....lot of love and hugs for u and ur sweet chris // :) <3
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Date: 12/28/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Dalia I don't think I would have got through recent troubled times without the support of wonderful people in my life:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 10:46:00 AM
This is very beautiful, although I feel kinda weird in stockings and this lovely dress! :)
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Date: 12/28/2015 11:04:00 AM
You've got lovely legs my friend lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 9:41:00 AM
Jan, this tribute piece to your friend(sister) touched my heart.And I saw an amazing love and a beautiful bond. Jan in my opinion she is your sister not by blood by but by love. This is winner in my eyes. Best of luck in the contest-Alexis 7
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Date: 12/28/2015 9:44:00 AM
Chris has done more to support me than my whole family put together in fact it wasn't until after dad's death did I tell mum about Bob's cancer and that was only because I talked about it on my radio interview about my journey into poetry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/28/2015 9:24:00 AM
Very sweet, Jan. You should adopt each other ;)
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Date: 12/28/2015 9:30:00 AM
She is a real diamond as a friend Lin I am so lucky to have her in my life:-) hugs Jan xx

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