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I Wish To Be

I Wish To Be I Wish To Be I Wish To See, I Wish To Be A Great Big Sea Ocean Wide And Ocean Blue, Oh So Bright Like The Great Big Moon, And Still There Flowing As It Is Fair...

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/10/2014 12:18:00 AM

I think you have done great with this poem. I expect to see more. from you. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Lexy Goodluck

Date: 4/8/2014 1:14:00 AM

This poem is fun. The rhythm is awesome!:)

Skat A

Date: 4/6/2014 6:43:00 AM

Hi, Ariana, I wish to be, the rain.... mutual common greatness. ..luv the poem. ..Skat

Gina Montalbo

Date: 4/5/2014 5:16:00 PM

very good for your first time... smiles and hugs.... Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2014 2:08:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Ariana :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2014 1:21:00 PM

ARIANA,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ariana Petrin
Date: 4/5/2014 8:25:00 PM

Thank you I Enjoy Your Feedback...Ariana

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/5/2014 12:57:00 AM

This is touching & beautiful. We all want to be more than what we believe we can reach for. The truth is, we can. :) Nicely done!

Ariana Petrin
Date: 4/5/2014 10:19:00 AM

Thank You Soo Much!!