I Wish

to you my sweet one how the moon shines bright but I'm alone tonight if only I could keep you there is no limit how I'd love you but I am alone I wish you could help me I can not help you am I being selfish to say goodbye so soon? if only I could keep you there is no limit how I'd love you

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Abdiel Rios

Date: 6/8/2015 1:45:00 PM

When you said " sweet one how the moon shines bright but I'm alone" would that mean that your talking about someone that you are , or used to be in love with? Just curious lol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2012 8:23:00 AM

Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Amy. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol