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I Will Try

I think I've stopped caring, and Oh what a shame. I have myself to blame. I keep trying to push myself off but something always makes me stop. I start to consider, how the one I love would fare if I was no longer there. Then I feel a stab of guilt, knowing what that would have meant. I'll stay a little while, even if it's for your smile. I guess I have to try, so you don't have to cry. This is not goodbye.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:42:00 PM

awes, thank you for the reply once again.... :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2015 5:33:00 PM

I like this line, "Then I feel a stab of guilt". Awesome line, I know exactly how that feels. I try to change, but I can't... Love this, Trinity. Let's see what else you got on your poem list :) Linda

Trinity Biles
Date: 1/14/2015 1:19:00 PM

I think one of my favorite parts about feedback is the fact that there are people who can identify with my feelings and that it's as if a connection is made on an extremely deep level. <3 -TJ

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/14/2014 5:04:00 PM

Too many can relate to this Trinity you've wrote here, it sadly happens All the time some some men don't appreciate what they're so lucky to have sometimes.Very nice expressed. Take care! A 7 for me. :) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Trinity Biles
Date: 11/15/2014 12:22:00 AM

I love when it's relateable. <3 you've warmed my heart again D. I love your comments and they really help me keep my head up. Blessed be, thank you, and kisses dear. -TJ

Meg Anderson

Date: 11/14/2014 8:01:00 AM

I know what you mean. Awesome insight!

Trinity Biles
Date: 11/14/2014 1:50:00 PM

Thank you dear. I love when it's relateable. <3-TJ

David Meade

Date: 11/13/2014 2:32:00 PM

An early warning alarm poem -- wake up little man and see the beautiful woman that await for you -- at least for a little while!!

Trinity Biles
Date: 11/13/2014 2:40:00 PM

Indeed Dave. I'm flattered and your comment made me smile. That's a good lesson to him though yes? Blessed be. -TJ