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I will pray

                            your beauty bleeds in the daylight
                            years of hard work, paid for your plight
                           you were the sweetest symphony
                             now a young heart's agony
                                youth and charm drifting away
                           callousness of time ruins your day
                              burdened with bricks you walk all the way
                            looking at you I have nothing to say
                             pretty Indian Woman, I will pray! I will pray

dedicated to the Indian lady working under a contruction site....

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:34:00 AM
    - Pleased to see your smiling face Red .... miss you! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:23:00 PM
    What a lovely dedication to this woman..your words are so lovely.

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:09:00 PM
    I hope your prayers are anwered. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Red, thanks for your kind comment, I hope you manage to write somentime soon...David xx

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:10:00 AM
    Stopping by to say hi..and to let you know I miss your poetry:) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 12:22:00 PM
    Red just stopping by to say hello, hope you have a peaceful weekend...David xx

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:00:00 AM
    Left me wanting more. This song of poetry was to short. Give us more. I missed your poems. I hadn't see ya around much. Glad to know you're still here.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 3:05:00 AM
    Super poem Red....a lovely dedicating. - Have a lovely Sunday to you, hope you are happy and well. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 4:25:00 PM
    Dear Red, makes one see your writing like a real picture .We never know what some have to do, just to live unless we see it. Excellent writing . hugs Anne

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:53:00 PM
    Red, you have painted a good picture of the plight of some people just to earn a living as such as it is. very well David xx

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Excellent write,dear Red! A great dedication to the hard working Indian Lady.Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:36:00 AM
    very nice!!