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I Will Praise the Lord

Favor shines upon you Light and sword protects Eternal grace and goodness Engulf this heart Capture my tears Capture my sorrow Flame a hope eternal The hope of Jerusalem My first attempt at Parallelismus Membrorum

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Date: 6/2/2010 8:08:00 AM
This is an expert attempt. I sometimes ago suggested to Deborah G. that were often familiar with this device while yet unaware of the apllication ... your mastery proves the point, because the device speaks to a mystic truth, that we have all been saying the same thing over and over since birth, being that we were made to give praise. Your inspiration is from the fountain of beginnings. One love
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Date: 5/20/2010 2:56:00 PM
i love this poem great write!
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