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I Will Never Leave You

I will never leave you is the promise I've made and if I ever fail you I will take that hurt to my grave. What a pleasure its been to have known you My passion for you is great. I met you when I was at my lowest and my love for you grows fonder each day. You give me comfort in distance that is great In you is my wholeness; In you, is my strength. You are beauty unequaled before my eyes The light in them that shines bright. You are gentle, so loving, so kind You give me peace I never knew could be mine I call you " My heaven, my sky" because Its beauty is vast and its the fairest comparison I can find No one will ever love you the way I do. I'm so grateful for you by my side "I will never leave you" is a not an empty promise but Something that will reveal itself in time. I'd be foolish to ever leave you I wanna love you for the rest of my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/1/2013 12:31:00 PM
Boy, it's really going to hurt when you guys have a fight. It'll bring you two closer together if you can get through it, but such energy and love does have its consequences. Again I can feel the power.
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done poet
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Madelin Barton
Date: 3/7/2013 6:38:00 PM
thank you Sean I'm very happy to c the well received responses I get....I know my shortcomings but I love to write I'm not an avid poet more like a novice so I do the best I can and also I think too much so I give it a go and see where it takes me I really appreciate the feedback Sean- Sincerely Maddie

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