I Will Go Sleep There

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And if they make me sleep Forever I will go sleep there I will go sleep there Forever With you in my heart In my very last hold My loving arms I will go sleep there If they make me I will surround you In my silk cocoon If I go sleep there If I go sleep there Forever With you in my heart It will not harness Against the sorrow Of how you lost me If they make me sleep Forever But you are my heart My very last hold My joy and laughter I will surround you Forever You will remember How I could make you Smile and be happy So If they make me sleep Forever I will go sleep there I will go sleep there Forever With you in my heart *** Meme by Mel Leach Poem by Darren White September 30, 2016

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2016 11:14:00 PM

Is 'meme' a form? I found your poem poignant. An emotional 'get the tissue so I can cry just 'cause I'm needing to even tho nothing sad has happened' reaction hit me. I thought of my love whom I never want to be without and thank you for your words that found and held me on a deep heart level ... CayCay

Darren White
Date: 10/1/2016 1:57:00 AM

If you take a look at my bio, there is a sunny picture above it. A meme. Mel made it for me, with the little poem I wrote, that is winding through it.

Darren White
Date: 10/1/2016 12:31:00 AM

The very contemporary definition of 'meme' as put in Merriam-Webster: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/meme In this poem of mine, it is the picture that comes with it. My friend finds a fitting picture, plus a little poem or text by someone else, and combines it. I am happy I could give you those feelings, I take it as a compliment, thank you.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/30/2016 6:56:00 AM

Peace and Beauty hand in hand ...

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2016 6:59:00 AM

Thank you so much... it is indeed meant to be peaceful.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2016 6:36:00 AM

A beautiful but sad love poem Darren :-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2016 6:58:00 AM

Thanks Jan. Nervousness for next week's surgery caused this writing. :-)