I Will

I will search for you when stars seem to be mute their sparkle shrouded by the cool soot of love's burning root, I will reach for you when my lips are lost, fever embossed, as the night brings only frost, soul between two tears tossed, I will pray for you when lightening lashes the rock of my wisdom, marking my mind with trails trenched in the temptation of Destiny's prism, I will serande for you as my most sensitive skin awakens to be awashed in heaven, seeking your sacred surfaces with open pours pronouncing passwords of passion, I will find you where the crossroads of creation and divination release revelation, divulging the rudiments of desire into senses romanced by body fire and love red vision - J.A.B.

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William Gray

Date: 1/29/2015 12:50:00 AM

Great stuff Justin!

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/12/2015 8:19:00 PM

Great love makes great life William. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/26/2015 1:59:00 PM

seeking your sacred surfaces with open pours pronouncing passwords of passion, My favorite line....So beautiful and divine...sultry sublime. The beauty of your words...

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/26/2015 4:37:00 PM

Yes Eileen, a man hunting the ecstasy of his woman's precious, secret warmth...devouring all of her sweetness and treasure...I love it when you tingle! J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 1/19/2015 8:43:00 AM

Beautiful write, ive a bit of catching up to do

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/19/2015 3:58:00 PM

Your wild heart has so much to express Jay...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/12/2015 5:47:00 AM

Rereading this beautiful poem.!

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/13/2015 2:44:00 AM

Thank you for rereading my love Charma...love never grows old in a heart like yours...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/8/2015 5:56:00 PM

Beautifully written Justin. When love matters, I will... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/10/2015 3:37:00 AM

Yes Verlena, when love matters one lives for the will of the heart...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/2/2015 8:30:00 PM

There is a simplicity in this piece, as the structure provides that sense, but the words are deep in that "love red vision" that you have shared with us. The last stanza is bursting with your wisdom and light. I admire your burning optimism and your selflessness in this amazing poem..Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/3/2015 2:09:00 PM

A simple desire intensly invoked...love...you see my heart's fire pure Laura...J.A.B.

Meg Anderson

Date: 1/2/2015 7:19:00 AM

To be sought after with such intent and love is every girls dream! This poem expresses that picture beautifully!

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/2/2015 8:00:00 PM

Yes Megan, every woman needs to be worshiped on the alter of love...every woman wants to know that she can ruin a man with the absence of her love. Your feeling about this poem is so perfect Megan...J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2015 5:25:00 PM

Justin, it's been a pleasure reading your newest. I am satisfied every time I leave the pavement of your words. Every line holds passion and a journey no poet can grant. Take Care ~LINDA~

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/1/2015 8:25:00 PM

Linda, you are a true aficionado of pure affection, a woman of discerning love dramatic...it pleases me to grant you this piece of my heart Linda...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/31/2014 7:53:00 AM

I can feel your heartbeat in this one Justin.WoWzer.Adding it to my fvs.Have a blessed New year : ) : )

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/31/2014 8:10:00 PM

You should feel my heartbeat Charma, uncommon love is all that you could possibly accept. You are a sensitive angel Charma...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/31/2014 5:00:00 AM

Oh Justin.....blessed is the one you write this for.....The beauty is beyond description...All the best to you, dear Eagle. Hope you soar higher and higher with the love of your life. This passion is epic....sweet....and enduring.

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/31/2014 1:51:00 PM

She and I are legends of love, innocent, fierce, unyeilding, and undefeated...we are love's dream Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/31/2014 5:01:00 AM

A favorite....TEACH THE WORLD HOW TO LOVE...

Leon Enriquez

Date: 12/31/2014 4:47:00 AM

Dear Justin: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/31/2014 1:26:00 PM

We share understanding of creative truth Leon.Your goodwill is much appreciated and is a good omen, thank you. J.A.B.