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I Was Young When I Left Home

t'was a splendid night and I'm feeling hopelessly unknown had a good old time, just a reeling with stories to be told now the paint is running out if the frame with my pockets emptied of loose change I was young when I left home I was young when I left home when the heart is great and the world proves itself too small n' when a stark ambition arises if only to fall the battlefield was left bloody and cold they all had knives but I came through alone I was young when I left home I was young when I left home may you find yourself a good someone to talk to and say to hell with these errant waves of misfortune then I hear your name from the darkness as I'm walking through the snow and a pleasant warmth embraces me, seeps deep into my bones there is no pretense in your sweet smile and I find the strength to go the extra mile I was young when I left home I was young when I left home y'must find yourself a good someone to talk to and say to hell with these errant waves of misfortune 'young when I left home I was young when I left home

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Date: 3/26/2015 2:51:00 PM
This is an excellent pen...I love the flow and the theme is unique... A 7 rating and a fav...I will have check out more....Tim
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 3/26/2015 5:45:00 PM
Really happy you liked this Tim. It came from a desire to communicate or explain To my very young child that I was once like her. Lol. Thanks.

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