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I Was Wrong

I thought you were there to catch me when I fall, but i was wrong. I thought you were there to give me strength when I am alone,but I was wrong. I thought you were there to wipe my tears and lend me your shoulder to cry on, but I was wrong. I thought I messaged you and you messaged me back nicely and truly, but I was wrong. I thought you understood what I meant, but I was wrong. I thought you are right for me, but sadly you are wrong. I thought you will never hurt me like everyone and leave me alone, but you did the same

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 7:55:00 PM

Kamal , a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2013 8:23:00 AM

Good morning Kamal, sad emotions, this kind of pain is never understood.. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/31/2013 1:20:00 PM

Kamal, a moving poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)