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I Was Thinking

How we become as one, Thinking about how much we’ve strung. After all I said is done, Its seem’s you thought it wasn’t in the physical, From I extended my hand to reach and touch you Like smoke poof you were gone… I took a glimpse , and a picture of you to see, And reconcile with the feeling’s I get When it seems you looking at me. I heard your voice. You show me the you care, I pause for a minute to hear your voice again… It’s strung at times when I think I've seen you, And hear word’s, I thought you said. I miss you right now, even tomorrow it will be worse…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/27/2011 10:46:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Gabriel. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 12:58:00 PM
Hola, Nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy
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