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I was thinking

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I was thinking

How we become as one,
Thinking about how much we’ve 
After all I said is done,
Its seem’s you thought it wasn’t in 
the physical,
From I extended my hand to reach 
and touch you
Like smoke poof you were gone…
I took a glimpse , and a picture of 
you to see,
And reconcile with the feeling’s I get
When it seems you looking at me.
I heard your voice.
You show me the you care,
I pause for a minute to hear your 
voice again…
It’s strung at times when I think I've 
seen you,
And hear word’s, I thought you said.
I miss you right now, even 
tomorrow it will be worse…

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  1. Date: 4/27/2011 10:46:00 AM
    Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Gabriel. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 12:58:00 PM
    Hola, Nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy