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I Was the First To Not Ice

now i am going to build the poem from that line now the space between the not and ice is that meant is this a poem about a droplet of water who refused to turn to ice sorry interrupted by the grail for the dude(remote control) now what if the space was an accident as if it was meant to emphasise the word notice her beauty his gentles there last breath(now that last line i thought of putting in genitals for a laugh but happy new 2020 minus some the nothing become just 2 metres beyond and a mask held by ears 2021 what a

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