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I Was So Nervous

Once I was asked to sing I was so nervous the spoon on the table toppled I was so nervous my nose fell off my face I was so nervous it was felt on the other side of the world I was so nervous california said they felt the earth quake I was so nervous Alaska told they had an avalanche I was so nervous BBC called the world's best richter scale broke I was so nervous the dollar commited sucide the stocks just collapsed I was so nervous the haunting spirits and the ghosts had goosebumps I was so nervous before my turn I hope the world would end. -Ravi 20/8/13

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Skat A

Date: 9/23/2013 10:15:00 PM

nice win. Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2013 10:19:00 PM

Ravi, Congrats on your "Fragment" winning poem. xox~ LINDA

Allan Koven

Date: 9/19/2013 5:00:00 PM

Running from fear. Where does one go? Perhaps back to the beginning. The day when one started to believe he had little control and emotions took over. You described it well. Allan

Ravi Kiran
Date: 9/19/2013 5:37:00 PM

thank you very much. Fear becomes so overwhelming that we wish world to end before facing the trouble some times...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/16/2013 4:27:00 PM

I like the humor, Congrats!

Ravi Kiran
Date: 9/16/2013 4:36:00 PM

thank you