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I Was Gonna Give You My Soul

I was gonna pledge with my heart. I was gonna give you my soul. This war of years has killed something inside. I don’t think it’ll ever let me go. You’ll never hear my words My love you’ll never know. The enemy found my tracks The enemy that wounded my bones. I was gonna give you my heart. I was gonna pledge with my soul. Not many rounds left in this gun. So many hunting me down… I’m sorry, it looks like I ain’t coming home.

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Date: 12/7/2023 3:35:00 PM
This has a sense of sadness, yet a little regret? Beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/18/2022 12:26:00 AM
I really like this poem sad with a touch of mystery? Enjoyed….Debx
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:28:00 PM
Thanks very much Deb. I’m glad you liked it.

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